We are always told to use body language in our writing. Sometimes, it’s easier said than written. I decided to create these cheat sheets to help you show a character’s state of mind. Obviously, a character may exhibit a number of these behaviours. For example, he may be shocked and angry, or shocked and happy. Use these combinations as needed.
You guys, this is such a great chart especially for budding writers. Sometimes it’s more effective to show a character being bored or excited or shocked without explicitly saying so.
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makochibana asked a question
Ahhhh Frites, but can you imagine if Makoto sleeps on the futon but still awkwardly reaches up to grab Haru (who sleeps very close to the edge of the bed so that Makoto can feel he is there) and he stays like that until he dozes off and his arm falls down
-Yes. YES! Except what if Makoto doesn’t let go.
So they choose to sleep together to avoid that problem.